- Prewriting - We generate ideas for writing like brainstorming, creating life maps, and purpose as well as through teacher motivation.
- Rough Draft - We get their ideas on paper like writting without concern for conventions.
- Reread - We proof their own work by reading aloud and reading for sensibility.
- Share with a peer revisor - We share and make suggestions for improvement like asking who, whats, or where, and how to make things better.
- Revise - Impove what the narrative says and how it says it like imagery. Put away unnecessary work. Use suggestion to improve it.
- Editing - Work together on editing for mechanics and spellings.
- Final Draft - We prduce our final copy to discuss with someone and write a final draft.
- Publishing - We publish our written pieces like sending our work to publisher.
Wednesday, August 18, 2010
Process Writting
Process of writing:
3 different guitarist
There are three types of guitarist in a band that plays a special part. Without these three, a band would be useless, and there will be no life.. these are the parts that make a song interesting and meaningful.
A lead guitarist plays a melodic lines, instrumental fil passages, and guitar solos within a song structure.
A bass guitarist plays a deep melodic sounds, making the sound of the guitar big, it's like the support of the rhythm guitarist.
A rhythm guitarist plays a rhythmic chordal accompaniment for a singer or other instruments in a musical ensemble.
All of these types can stand alone in a different genres, but it will create better outcome when combined and played together as one.
Wednesday, August 4, 2010
Intramurus!!!
Intramurus is a great place, according to me, I never knew that Intramurus is the heart of Manila. Before I was ignoring the name Intramurus, but now I was kinda shock when I found out the history of the place... Intramurus is really great! And the field trip is really awesome!!!
Thursday, July 29, 2010
Assignment for 07/29/10
Outline:
Westgrove’s Green Engineering Architecture
I. Introduction (Is gonna talk about or define what’s westgrove?, what’s the history of Westgrove?, Where westgrove is located?
II. G.E.A. (Is gonna talk about what’s green engineering architecture? What’s the purpose of it? Is it really helpful for the environment? Is green engineering architecture is use to beautify a certain place? Or used to help the environment for our future? Or it’s used for attraction and to help the environment?
III. Westgrove and G.E.A. ( Is gonna talk about the process of architecting westgrove, and if westgrove is using green engineering architecture.
IV. Westgrove’s Accomplishments ( Is gonna talk about the accomplishment of westgrove with the use of green engineering process around it’s perimeter.
V. Effects and Affect ( is gonna talk about the effects of using the process of green engineering, and does it affects the environment)
Westgrove’s Green Engineering Architecture
I. Introduction (Is gonna talk about or define what’s westgrove?, what’s the history of Westgrove?, Where westgrove is located?
II. G.E.A. (Is gonna talk about what’s green engineering architecture? What’s the purpose of it? Is it really helpful for the environment? Is green engineering architecture is use to beautify a certain place? Or used to help the environment for our future? Or it’s used for attraction and to help the environment?
III. Westgrove and G.E.A. ( Is gonna talk about the process of architecting westgrove, and if westgrove is using green engineering architecture.
IV. Westgrove’s Accomplishments ( Is gonna talk about the accomplishment of westgrove with the use of green engineering process around it’s perimeter.
V. Effects and Affect ( is gonna talk about the effects of using the process of green engineering, and does it affects the environment)
Wednesday, July 21, 2010
Environmental Architecture
Outline:
I. Introduction
a) Westgrove Heights
Outline:
I. Introduction
a) Westgrove Heights
- History
- When is it developed
b) Green Engineering Architecture
- What is Green Engineering
- Whats the purpose
II. Westgrove Architect
III. Westgrove Architect's Accomplishment
IV. Westgroves Archictectural sights
V. Green Engineering Architecture in Westgrove
- Do they use green engineering acritecture.?
- Do they use another Architectural process?
VI. Outcome of the green engineering architecture in westgrove.
Sunday, July 18, 2010
Tonights Emo Jam
I played a music in front of my family and relatives a song that they'll never gonna forget, But to bad, that song is not really for them... Sheeesh!!! I was really calm while playing the guitar and singing, I never knew that I can do it...
I will be joining the Acoustic night this coming september in La Salle and I wish I will do great.. I am a bit nervous, curious, and abnotious, WONDERING HOW WILL I DO!
The reason why I joined it's because of someone I really care about, someone I cant seem to stop thinking about...
I guess I am already inlove. Yehiiii!!!! I might faint in front of anyone if I dedicate one special song person....
I will be joining the Acoustic night this coming september in La Salle and I wish I will do great.. I am a bit nervous, curious, and abnotious, WONDERING HOW WILL I DO!
The reason why I joined it's because of someone I really care about, someone I cant seem to stop thinking about...
I guess I am already inlove. Yehiiii!!!! I might faint in front of anyone if I dedicate one special song person....
Sunday, July 11, 2010
My terrible friend!
I have this friend who keeps on bugging me like hell!!! If I should state his name, Its fucking Ian!!! God Damn that guy!!! shit... Me a gay?! Who do you think he is for him to use my freaking account and post something like that!!! Shit...
Monday, July 5, 2010
Local Happening.
Westgrove is a really quiet place until we came in. Haha, We are like the most noisy family in that subdivision, because of our bandset haha!!! Anyway, Westgrove is green, cleen, and peacful. Westgrove is a large village, and I think house and lot there are really expensive... Unfortunately.
My Hometown
Singapore is where I grew up, and where I started my life. When I was a kid, I love going to the mall then eat alot of stuff. Malls in singapore are always near wherever you are. I live in a classy village there, but I wanna live in a appartment, because its really hard to get out of the village...
The only problem with Singapore is, they are all the same, I mean when it comes to band, they like playing electric-pop, which makes me sick!! I would rather die you know?
The only thing I love in Singapore are the foods, but not babes... Babes there are manly disgusting!!! Not most of them... I love and hate my hometown, I love the foods, and the place, but I hate the view haha, if you know what I mean
The only problem with Singapore is, they are all the same, I mean when it comes to band, they like playing electric-pop, which makes me sick!! I would rather die you know?
The only thing I love in Singapore are the foods, but not babes... Babes there are manly disgusting!!! Not most of them... I love and hate my hometown, I love the foods, and the place, but I hate the view haha, if you know what I mean
Wednesday, June 30, 2010
Worst Day...
Ugh!!! What a crazy day! The girl that changed everything about me is now doubting me because of a rumors about me!! Which is not true!!! Ugh! Ihate backstubbers!!! They make me sick! Anyway... Things are not getting better, we are having a family crisis, My girl is now doubting, and etc... Can this year could get any worst?
Sunday, June 27, 2010
Oh Shit!
My hair looks crappy today!!! damn my instinct for having a haircut... damn!!! haha I hate my freaking hair!
How to compose a song
There's something magical about songwriting. No matter how many songs I write or how much I know about songwriting, I am still amazed and a little awestruct that it happens at all. How does a song get started? How do you know where to go next? How do you know if your song is any good? Well, A song that expresses what you fell is a good song, even if no one else thinks so. A song that expresses your thoughts and feelings in a way that reaches other people, helps them f eel something deeper or understanding something better.
How does a song get started?
This is the most difficult part in songwritting, and its also one of the most important because if you start well, you'll have a lot less trouble down the line. This is the part where you dictates where it wants to go.
How does a song get started?
This is the most difficult part in songwritting, and its also one of the most important because if you start well, you'll have a lot less trouble down the line. This is the part where you dictates where it wants to go.
Wednesday, June 23, 2010
Midnight crisis
Ugh!!! I cut my hair for no reason! Now I look like a coconut head! Damn it! I am listening to this certain song which makes me realize my life with her... Too bad I guess. I learned to know my true-self... I realized that I am just being a hypocrit before... Thanks for her, I know what i've been like before...
Tonight War
Here I am sitting, waiting for the reply of the girl of my life, trying to fix everything... Our war is like a war of an ant and termites... Never ending saga between her and me..
Monday, June 21, 2010
"How to dedicate a song for someone you really love"
- Look for a song that will fits the situation between you two
- Prepare and practice the song to prevent consciousness
- Open your heart when the time is there already
- Sing freely
When on the stage, always put your focus on the song and on your love one, cuz its like you are the only two in the there. Make sure that that person will understand the message of that song, or the message that you are trying to to tell her.
- Look for a song that will fits the situation between you two
- Prepare and practice the song to prevent consciousness
- Open your heart when the time is there already
- Sing freely
When on the stage, always put your focus on the song and on your love one, cuz its like you are the only two in the there. Make sure that that person will understand the message of that song, or the message that you are trying to to tell her.
Thursday, June 17, 2010
Red Day!!!
I spent my whole day talking to Red (Precilda), I was like so happy that I wished I knew her earlier than this.... Damn I am no happy!!! If only we have all the time for each other and I will be so thrilled...
Tuesday, June 15, 2010
"Ulala"
Me and my friends use this term whenever we encounter a pretty, hot, coca-cola shaped body girl!!! haha.. There is this one time me and my bestfriend were walking around Alabang Town Center and we saw this girl who is awesome and hot, and my friend was like " Ulala oh shit!!! Did you saw that girl?! Godamn! I think I am taken hhahahaa"
"Ho"
I use this term whenever I confront a whore... Ho and whore are almost alike, actually they have the same meaning. haha. Ho is a girl who loves sleeping with a different guy every different day.
Me and my friends use this term whenever we encounter a pretty, hot, coca-cola shaped body girl!!! haha.. There is this one time me and my bestfriend were walking around Alabang Town Center and we saw this girl who is awesome and hot, and my friend was like " Ulala oh shit!!! Did you saw that girl?! Godamn! I think I am taken hhahahaa"
"Ho"
I use this term whenever I confront a whore... Ho and whore are almost alike, actually they have the same meaning. haha. Ho is a girl who loves sleeping with a different guy every different day.
Damn!!! I saw my crush to day, and I was like so inlove, wherever I go my heart beats like a jackhammer crashing down a certain material... You know how fast that is? haha, anyway, its been like 4 weeks already I still haven't taken my chance yet... I feel so hopeless and down... Do you know the feeling whenever you like someone, you feel that you don't deserve that person.... For some reason I can't sleep everynight cuz i keep on thinking of her, I keep on remembering her shimmering face, glittery eyes, and coca-cola shaped body, wow!! tsk tsk... my heart falls...
Thursday, June 10, 2010
How did I woke up this morning
When I opened my eyes my cold attacks, my nose became so sensitive and wet, my head is hurts so bad, its like my brain is going to pop vain... The worst part is I've planned to talk to my only crush today, but I look so pale its like I dont have any blood anymore.... Anyway, after worrying, I heard my mom calling me for breakfast, I cant even walk down straight, I felt so drunk even though I am not.... When I tasted the food, I can't taste anything...
Wednesday, June 9, 2010
My Painful Night
Today is quite a bit irritating because I am sick... My head is feeling so twisted, my nose is hurting, my eyes are drifting wet, and my throat is burning.... Anyway. I played PS3 All day, I talked to my girl, and I lay my head on the bed. :) as usual
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